Short evaluation of first music video draft

This music video was successful in producing a video that is easy on the eye. I have found the lip syncing and editing to be good, but the music video is lacking in artistic inspiration, so i believe i need to do some more filming to improve not only the level and content of my video but the visual quality of the video. After getting a few verbal comments from teachers and students, the overall opinion is that it is good but it get very boring quickly as it is just same shots/sequence repeated throughout. In order to improve my music video as i previously suggested i need new footage in possibly a new location in order to create a new aspect to the video and also to create another dimension on which the audience can either understand or relate to in their own way, so i will not be suggesting a certain connotation, but as a part of my genre there is clear and understandable convention/ideas associated with it, so i feel with the new footage i should start to incorporate these into the video as the genre and the artists appeal will become obvious therefore grabbing my audiences attention.